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You have touched me.

posted by UtahJay on July 9, 2013 at 2:43 PM | link to this | reply

The world keeps on moving.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on July 9, 2013 at 12:22 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome

A very powerful but also very sad poem! And I certainly hope it is borne of reflection, not of experience...

posted by Nautikos on July 9, 2013 at 9:15 AM | link to this | reply

What a powerful poem, Simone. Touching on clinical, even.  I imagine that, sometimes, in special circumstances, Apathy could be a blessing. The line 'Nothing is easier to follow so Nothing is what leads' is maybe the easiest way out.

posted by adnohr on July 9, 2013 at 1:09 AM | link to this | reply

Life won't miss you. People will. That poem can be used to have the opposite effect on someone.

posted by Dr_JPT on July 8, 2013 at 9:56 PM | link to this | reply

Now that's a sad poem.  I think I shall never give up dreaming, never give up hope, never give up singing.  Of course at age 75 the dreams are different than they were at 25, but the hope is even stronger and the singing more enjoyable.

posted by TAPS. on July 8, 2013 at 9:48 PM | link to this | reply