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Sinome
Powerful, though I sincerely hope not born of personal pain...
posted by
Nautikos
on July 4, 2013 at 7:42 PM
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So vivid that it brings a lump to the throat xxxxxx
posted by
lionreign
on July 4, 2013 at 2:47 AM
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so very heart breaking, I suppose ...well I know we dread the thought of losing that special one.
posted by
Kabu
on July 3, 2013 at 3:55 PM
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Why such sad prose . . . ? 
posted by
JimmyA
on July 3, 2013 at 1:34 PM
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I wonder if those I have loved, even my mother, if they felt like this, if she, after father passed...I hope not...So sad.
posted by
UtahJay
on July 3, 2013 at 1:14 PM
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I wonder if those I have loved, even my mother, if they felt like this, if she, after father passed...I hope not...So sad.
posted by
UtahJay
on July 3, 2013 at 1:14 PM
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I like how Adnohr reminds us that we're never truly alone but your poem most certainly paints a poignant and vivid picture of those moments we we think we are. 
posted by
Troosha
on July 3, 2013 at 1:00 PM
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Sinome
This post envelopes a warm place of glowing words love. BC-A, Bill's R
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posted by
BC-A
on July 3, 2013 at 12:59 PM
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I would hate to be in such a situation.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 3, 2013 at 9:25 AM
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How desperately sad and terrible is that feeling, until we lift our head and remember that we are never really alone. You captured the emotion completely.
posted by
adnohr
on July 3, 2013 at 8:55 AM
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