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Re: JimmyA

I used to be, these days I am less worried

posted by lionreign on July 4, 2013 at 3:16 AM | link to this | reply

Re: UtahJay

It took a while of stretching my mind back and imagining others before I could remember too

posted by lionreign on July 4, 2013 at 3:12 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Kabu

I guess these days they have it easier, they just dance near each other, never asking

posted by lionreign on July 4, 2013 at 3:08 AM | link to this | reply

Re: MsJudy

Thank you, this one was an empathy piece so I am delighted you think so

posted by lionreign on July 4, 2013 at 3:07 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Annicita

Thank you

posted by lionreign on July 4, 2013 at 3:03 AM | link to this | reply

Re: BC-A

Thanks!

posted by lionreign on July 4, 2013 at 3:01 AM | link to this | reply

Re: C_C_T

Thank you.  My garden is in need of some TLC, I' have been studying so the garden got a little neglected :/

posted by lionreign on July 4, 2013 at 2:55 AM | link to this | reply

Re: FormerStudentIntern

Thank you

posted by lionreign on July 4, 2013 at 2:51 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Sinome

Thank you sweetie, glad you enjoyed it xxxx

posted by lionreign on July 4, 2013 at 2:41 AM | link to this | reply

Not me! Way too shy! I'm so glad I'm already married . . .

posted by JimmyA on July 3, 2013 at 1:21 PM | link to this | reply

I can't remember the last time I was in a bar, but now I can...Well done.

posted by UtahJay on July 2, 2013 at 10:23 PM | link to this | reply

you are right. It was so frustrating at dances when someone you really wanted to dance with didn't ask you and you danced instead with Cousins, your friends little Brother and ...One was going to say Yes ...if you asked.

posted by Kabu on July 2, 2013 at 8:04 PM | link to this | reply

You capture the feeling of the fear of rejection beautifully.

posted by MsJudy on July 2, 2013 at 7:56 PM | link to this | reply

ah yes....well described

posted by Annicita on July 2, 2013 at 5:48 PM | link to this | reply

lionreign

There's the beat. BC-A, Bill's Rst

posted by BC-A on July 2, 2013 at 3:17 PM | link to this | reply

Realistic Lion been gardening?

posted by C_C_T on July 2, 2013 at 11:40 AM | link to this | reply

You capture the inner tension felt so well in this poem.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on July 2, 2013 at 10:28 AM | link to this | reply

Absolutely my friend... What a wonderful poem and what a great message!  Mmissed you :-)  xoxoxo

posted by Sinome on July 2, 2013 at 5:23 AM | link to this | reply