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nice and short story....the way you tell the story has the person standing there as a 3rd party witnessing it

posted by Annicita on May 28, 2013 at 7:36 PM | link to this | reply

You do a great job at developing character.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on May 28, 2013 at 9:51 AM | link to this | reply