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I wonder what time spread this involved Naut. It is remarkable  how he can slum through some lines and glory through others. I don't think many could carry this off today, instant gratification and few words seem the way to go.

posted by C_C_T on April 11, 2013 at 11:43 AM | link to this | reply

"The river bears no empty bottles, sandwich papers, Silk handkerchiefs, cardboard boxes, cigarette ends..."

I wish I could say the same about our Mighty MO.

posted by TAPS. on April 11, 2013 at 10:08 AM | link to this | reply

It's an interesting read...I'll check out the critiques.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on April 11, 2013 at 10:01 AM | link to this | reply