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Very well done. Unfortunately all too true for the Janes out there.

posted by adnohr on February 10, 2013 at 9:24 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome

If I wasn't on my new meds this poem would have had me in tears again, you're very gifted my friend.

posted by WileyJohn on February 7, 2013 at 5:31 PM | link to this | reply

Oh my goodness Superb. Jane was her name and none of us cared.

My darling friend....I salute you!!  

posted by Kabu on February 7, 2013 at 4:03 PM | link to this | reply

Absolutely amazing! I told you that your previous poem sounded like something I might write for my wife. And then you present this one! Guess what my wife's name is! Are you psychic? 

posted by JimmyA on February 7, 2013 at 11:59 AM | link to this | reply

A sad poem I find this to be.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on February 7, 2013 at 10:11 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome

Yery powerful, and very sad...

posted by Nautikos on February 7, 2013 at 8:52 AM | link to this | reply

A very sad truth, but beautifully written. x

posted by Collene on February 7, 2013 at 8:17 AM | link to this | reply

how sad but yet so true

posted by Lanetay on February 7, 2013 at 8:05 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome

®I wondered about a homeless woman, sitting against a building downtown in the cold. The words kept, running though my mind she needs help and are the homeless shelters open to all love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st

posted by BC-A on February 7, 2013 at 7:02 AM | link to this | reply

Very sad emotions were put in this poem 

posted by Chuck_E_Ibrahim on February 7, 2013 at 3:36 AM | link to this | reply

Very sad.

posted by UtahJay on February 7, 2013 at 12:12 AM | link to this | reply

Truth is sometimes too awful to do this in the hope of surviving another day

posted by C_C_T on February 6, 2013 at 11:06 PM | link to this | reply