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You have some very poignant closes! KUDOS! sam 

posted by sam444 on February 4, 2013 at 3:21 PM | link to this | reply

Katray2

Nicely said kiddo and we have enough of that snow here, and cold.

posted by WileyJohn on February 2, 2013 at 5:38 PM | link to this | reply

You have a ay with imagery.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on February 2, 2013 at 11:36 AM | link to this | reply

Sometimes just standing and watching the snow fall can actually be somewhat mesmerizing . . . if those city lights don't interfere! Peaceful calm . . .

posted by JimmyA on February 2, 2013 at 7:50 AM | link to this | reply

Yes you can swing it Ray, if you can raise tempatures in such a frosty scenario you must be doing something right. 

 

posted by C_C_T on February 2, 2013 at 12:29 AM | link to this | reply

Yes you can swing it Ray, if you can raise tempatures in such a frosty scenario you must be doing something right. 

 

posted by C_C_T on February 2, 2013 at 12:28 AM | link to this | reply

My goodness Katray, what a wonderful poem. One of the very best I have read for a long, long time. Bravo Bravo Bravo.

posted by UtahJay on February 1, 2013 at 10:43 PM | link to this | reply