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Simone

A symphony of longing...

posted by Nautikos on January 30, 2013 at 12:09 PM | link to this | reply

nice romantic thoughts

posted by Lanetay on January 30, 2013 at 8:05 AM | link to this | reply

For some reason this poem reminds me of Cuba.

posted by adnohr on January 30, 2013 at 7:00 AM | link to this | reply

I'm not not an romantic and chick flicks bore the hell out of me, but ' Her kiss' is execeptional 

posted by BrittWit on January 30, 2013 at 6:19 AM | link to this | reply

Her kiss

You can really feel her pining for love.

posted by 2Philomena on January 29, 2013 at 11:47 PM | link to this | reply

Her kiss..

posted by 2Philomena on January 29, 2013 at 11:46 PM | link to this | reply

Such love and such a beautiful way to express it.

posted by Justi on January 29, 2013 at 7:27 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome

Very gently sensual and full of love

posted by WileyJohn on January 29, 2013 at 5:32 PM | link to this | reply

as always dear Sinome....so achinly beautiful.

posted by Kabu on January 29, 2013 at 5:13 PM | link to this | reply

You write with such beauty, it will be fun to catch up on my reading when it comes to your work, I just didn't have the time, or the will to borrow a computer for too long while I was in Denver, as I left the lap top home by mistake.

posted by UtahJay on January 29, 2013 at 2:39 PM | link to this | reply

A gentle build up whispering of desire. Rather sensuous in concept, but quite acceptable.  

posted by C_C_T on January 29, 2013 at 10:27 AM | link to this | reply

Hi there Marta
I really feel that the sprawling white sands of the sea needs a warm wet kiss xoxoxo. Beautifully composed!

posted by anib on January 29, 2013 at 9:49 AM | link to this | reply

So many beautiful images in this poem. I cannot pick a favorite.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on January 29, 2013 at 9:35 AM | link to this | reply