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Simone

I certainly hope this was not based on personal, but only empathic experience...

posted by Nautikos on January 25, 2013 at 7:45 PM | link to this | reply

through the crying  windows of an empty train.
She believes she is alone in a world full of people.

nice imagery....

posted by PoeticPoetry on January 25, 2013 at 1:51 PM | link to this | reply

Sad to feel that way.

posted by adnohr on January 25, 2013 at 1:45 PM | link to this | reply

Very true . . . there's always tomorrow! Never give up hope! 

posted by JimmyA on January 25, 2013 at 11:30 AM | link to this | reply

We all need love and to be held Touch is so important

yes, darling friend, maybe tomorrow.

posted by Kabu on January 25, 2013 at 11:29 AM | link to this | reply

I like the thought of tomorrow, it keeps me coming back to today.

posted by UtahJay on January 25, 2013 at 11:25 AM | link to this | reply

Nice poem Simone and aint it the truth.

posted by C_C_T on January 25, 2013 at 10:52 AM | link to this | reply

Hopefully she will find love.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on January 25, 2013 at 10:10 AM | link to this | reply

yes love would be nice to find

posted by Lanetay on January 25, 2013 at 9:23 AM | link to this | reply