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I love the rhythm!
posted by
2Philomena
on January 30, 2013 at 12:04 AM
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Time and memories, so great in their respective ways!! Nice poem.
posted by
mariss9
on January 23, 2013 at 7:59 PM
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I remember those days
posted by
UtahJay
on January 23, 2013 at 1:48 PM
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I adore this one! Wonderful work! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 23, 2013 at 10:55 AM
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Oh... that's life, and I love the rhymes.
posted by
Eleanor_Jazz
on January 23, 2013 at 6:44 AM
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Thanks Sinome and Kabu :) I like that you picked up on it, FSI. I had first put "Back to black" , the Amy Winehouse song, but it didn't fit properly. First it is sung by her, not a band, and second it wasn't a song that I grew up listening to, and the poem was a reminiscence. Oddly, as I was pondering if I should change it to something else, "Back in black" came on the pandora station I was listening to. Naturally, I started jamming to it, and the new line was quickly born. Along with a new video blog post :)
posted by
calia14
on January 22, 2013 at 12:43 PM
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I do enjoy your work
posted by
Kabu
on January 22, 2013 at 11:24 AM
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Drenched in memories, this one, but still so you Calia. Great work xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on January 22, 2013 at 10:02 AM
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I like the allusion to AC/DC.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on January 22, 2013 at 9:57 AM
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