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I love the rhythm!

posted by 2Philomena on January 30, 2013 at 12:04 AM | link to this | reply

Time and memories, so great in their respective ways!! Nice poem.

posted by mariss9 on January 23, 2013 at 7:59 PM | link to this | reply

I remember those days

posted by UtahJay on January 23, 2013 at 1:48 PM | link to this | reply

I adore this one! Wonderful work! sam 

posted by sam444 on January 23, 2013 at 10:55 AM | link to this | reply

Oh... that's life, and I love the rhymes.

posted by Eleanor_Jazz on January 23, 2013 at 6:44 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks Sinome and Kabu :)  I like that you picked up on it, FSI.  I had first put "Back to black" , the Amy Winehouse song, but it didn't fit properly.  First it is sung by her, not a band, and second it wasn't a song that I grew up listening to, and the poem was a reminiscence.  Oddly, as I was pondering if I should change it to something else, "Back in black" came on the pandora station I was listening to.  Naturally, I started jamming to it, and the new line was quickly born.  Along with a new video blog post :)

posted by calia14 on January 22, 2013 at 12:43 PM | link to this | reply

I do enjoy your work

posted by Kabu on January 22, 2013 at 11:24 AM | link to this | reply

Drenched in memories, this one, but still so you Calia.  Great work  xoxoxo 

posted by Sinome on January 22, 2013 at 10:02 AM | link to this | reply

I like the allusion to AC/DC.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on January 22, 2013 at 9:57 AM | link to this | reply