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Thank You! FormerStudent...

Hello and Happy Holidaze!

posted by PoeticPoetry on December 15, 2012 at 11:51 PM | link to this | reply

What beautiful imagery you got there.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on December 15, 2012 at 11:47 AM | link to this | reply

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Thank you, Chuck.

posted by PoeticPoetry on December 15, 2012 at 9:27 AM | link to this | reply

Lovely poem and lovely style. I wish I knew about the contest. I have written a lovely poem about the birth of Christ  I will be posting soon.

posted by Chuck_E_Ibrahim on December 15, 2012 at 8:58 AM | link to this | reply

Re: I like the way you connected the appearance of the birds to advent and

YES, that is what I was hoping someone would 'see'... thank you, thank you!

posted by PoeticPoetry on December 15, 2012 at 7:55 AM | link to this | reply

I like the way you connected the appearance of the birds to advent and

Christmas

posted by Straightforward on December 15, 2012 at 6:21 AM | link to this | reply

I got the sex wrong? Turtle-doves and Turkeys?

CC, it is YOU who may be the 'turkey'.  Ok, go ahead....post your white turkey!

posted by PoeticPoetry on December 15, 2012 at 5:57 AM | link to this | reply

Yes, they would make a great Christmas Card...

Thanks.BCA

posted by PoeticPoetry on December 15, 2012 at 5:51 AM | link to this | reply

YThose birds looked like the cover of a Christmas card love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st

posted by BC-A on December 15, 2012 at 1:41 AM | link to this | reply

Well PP obviously you got the sex wrong, everyone knows the aggressive one is the female. Oh welcome back, I think. It is a nice poem, I hope you get a gong or whatever. A word to our dear Jay. Can you put a couple of turtle doves on your blog preferably

billing and cooing. Or I shall have to post a white turkey. Sorry Jackie.

posted by C_C_T on December 15, 2012 at 12:42 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Contest ends 31 December...

I'm more excited about seeing those two doves (pigeons) sitting outside my window than I am about this poem I wrote as a result.   I look at it as some sort of present.  I mean, how many times in your life do you see two doves sitting next to one another on one of your trees? HUH???

posted by PoeticPoetry on December 14, 2012 at 10:40 PM | link to this | reply

I thought the poem was wonderful. Did it win?

posted by UtahJay on December 14, 2012 at 10:22 PM | link to this | reply