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®This poem the reader can feel the touch. You give it a delicate touch love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st

posted by BC-A on October 27, 2012 at 9:10 PM | link to this | reply

Take bread there are many kinds. They usually have a an explanation brown, Rye, etc.

Love should have the same maybe.

posted by C_C_T on October 26, 2012 at 10:27 PM | link to this | reply

ooooooooooooo that one sounds like my ex husband!

posted by Annicita on October 26, 2012 at 12:59 PM | link to this | reply

Oh yes, it bothers me too when people use their "nature" as an excuse. The poem sums up the frustration with those people well.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on October 26, 2012 at 9:51 AM | link to this | reply