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Re: Wow, nicely done! I like the warm flow of emotions feeding the physical
Hey Kat, well hey, if you dare, I definitely will! Lol, let's get this party poppin! write me back. 
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RamfamilyWritings
on October 27, 2012 at 5:15 PM
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Wow, nicely done! I like the warm flow of emotions feeding the physical
Blogit used to be a pretty wild-ride place back in the day. It is still fun here but tamer. I have posted some fairly erotic pieces during my times (removed and saved) and have gotten positive reactions, lol. Thanks for reminding me! I may repost one or two soon in my poetry blogs. 
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Katray2
on October 26, 2012 at 10:28 AM
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Thank you Jay, I appreciate that!
posted by
RamfamilyWritings
on October 26, 2012 at 8:25 AM
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I am really liking you work.
posted by
UtahJay
on October 25, 2012 at 9:47 PM
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Thank you FS. Have you had a chance to read the other comments? So funny! I guess this type of poetry doesn't go over so well here on blogit, guess I won't post my vagina poem then, huh? 
Lmao!!! Omg, I'm cracking up over here! Thanks for the visit and read FS. Have a great night and weekend.
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RamfamilyWritings
on October 25, 2012 at 8:41 PM
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I get that you like the photo CCT, but what about the poem...? I see your point, there sure wouldn't be many babies or happy people, for that matter, if one had to cut a part off and plant the seeds manually, omg, haha, that's so funny, lmao!!! 
What a visual!! Hahaha!!! Rofl!!! I love your comments CCT! Thanks for the visit, read, and comment and as always the laugh. Have a wonderful night.
posted by
RamfamilyWritings
on October 25, 2012 at 8:38 PM
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Well written\
posted by
Straightforward
on October 25, 2012 at 8:34 PM
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Lmao! Good suggestion Annicita. I guess I can always change the you's to me's and my's, and make it a poem about masterbation 
. Lmfao!!! Just kidding, I didn't realize how many there actually were, you're right, they are kinda monotonous. Thanks for the read, comment, and suggestion Annicita, I'll work on it.
posted by
RamfamilyWritings
on October 25, 2012 at 8:31 PM
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its a very sensual poem....i have one suggestion....take some of the yous out of it....
posted by
Annicita
on October 25, 2012 at 4:44 PM
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Nice photo Con, I suppose there would not be many babies if one had to cut a part off and plant carefully.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 25, 2012 at 11:05 AM
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You touch upon the senses well in this poem.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on October 25, 2012 at 9:59 AM
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