Comments on (page 32)

Go to ASHTRAY MEMORIESAdd a commentGo to (page 32)

I feel that you have done a fine job in conveying what has gone on throughout your life...Often I've wondered how well I've captured the emotion of the situation and the essence of a person.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on September 15, 2012 at 11:32 AM | link to this | reply

The ways of man are not guided by logic Jay. The ways of Angels are not known.

posted by C_C_T on September 15, 2012 at 9:26 AM | link to this | reply

UtahJay

 

If there is understanding for me out of your writing, it is that it must be cathartic for your psyche to look at this life, accept it as being like all other humans, a mixture of pain and joy with a certain amount of guilt which of course is useless to the good man you made yourself. "Let wickedness escape as it may at the bar, it never fails of doing justice upon itself; for every guilty person is his own hamgman." Seneca

posted by WileyJohn on September 15, 2012 at 7:51 AM | link to this | reply

I seem to remember a place as hard as the one you describe.

No hell like the one we make for ourselves, I'm thinking.  Write on!

posted by Pat_B on September 15, 2012 at 3:54 AM | link to this | reply

Reading the introductory makes the poem much more attractive  Also go back to my quotes. I have changed it because you didn't understand it. And I thought may others would think the same like you. Have a nice weekend.

posted by Chuck_E_Ibrahim on September 15, 2012 at 1:51 AM | link to this | reply

how were you to know what would be waiting for you.

posted by Kabu on September 14, 2012 at 8:01 PM | link to this | reply