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This is beautiful and touching! 
posted by
Nautikos
on September 22, 2012 at 7:34 PM
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This is lovely, the imagery is touching
posted by
lionreign
on September 17, 2012 at 3:02 AM
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A Sparrow Set Free
Wonderful, profound imagery with a very poignant close.
posted by
2Philomena
on September 16, 2012 at 1:28 AM
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Hello my Shobana, I have come back for a little while! I love this one and the close was magnificent! Your sam 
posted by
sam444
on September 15, 2012 at 9:58 PM
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I just had to come back for another read.
posted by
UtahJay
on September 15, 2012 at 3:38 PM
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shobana
òLearn from the sparrow love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on September 15, 2012 at 8:00 AM
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I could feel the mist of those clouds, a sort of cool spray of your words today.
posted by
UtahJay
on September 14, 2012 at 2:47 PM
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Very nice...
posted by
Reflecting_teddypoet
on September 14, 2012 at 1:54 PM
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I love the little sparrows and always put food out for them.
I always think about that song about God's eye is on the sparrow and I know he watches me.
posted by
TAPS.
on September 14, 2012 at 11:46 AM
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the world is so horrible so full of blind hate and distrust and polarized
ideals...this is a story of hope to heal the heart. Thank you darling.
posted by
Kabu
on September 14, 2012 at 11:31 AM
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The sparrow is a good metaphor for humans, I feel.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 14, 2012 at 10:31 AM
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how nice of that little girl
posted by
Lanetay
on September 14, 2012 at 9:28 AM
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It was you Shobana, I thought she might get her Dad to kill it out of its misery, but no the little girl blessed and restored it to good health, I suppose we all want to hear of such kindness when cruelty abounds.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 14, 2012 at 6:57 AM
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love the imagery ... i can visualize it...great job
posted by
Annicita
on September 14, 2012 at 6:08 AM
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Beautiful poetry with a wonderful imagery
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on September 14, 2012 at 5:06 AM
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Re:
Thank you Justi and I hope you are doing well my friend.
posted by
shobana
on September 14, 2012 at 12:50 AM
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Oh I loved it. It was so fresh, free and sweet. Be blessed.
posted by
Justi
on September 14, 2012 at 12:45 AM
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