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I did not find the poem to be hurtful. I feel that you have done a fine job in capturing how nature can be.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 9, 2012 at 9:36 AM
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Your poem "Alone"
I don't think you should ever apologize for anything you write...especially one as thoughtful as this. Nature brought my husband and I together for the same reasons, in the beginning. We met at age 12 at Junior High School dance. We were together for 63 years! And yes, I was one of those 15 year old girls at one time in my life; though not as open and unabashed as they are today about sex! 
posted by
PoeticPoetry
on September 9, 2012 at 8:27 AM
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It's the call of life to life, the imperative to reproduce the species.
Nature doesn't care if the consequences for impulsive coupling are inconvenient or even disastrous for a particular individual - or couple. What nature wants are numbers of offspring, a wide gene pool flowing swift. Fifteen-year-olds are owned by nature.
posted by
Pat_B
on September 9, 2012 at 4:25 AM
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This is an awesome work. The powerful forces of nature in the untrained hands of youth.
posted by
Justi
on September 8, 2012 at 9:36 PM
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