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A great portrayal of hard times for God's creatures. 
posted by
mariss9
on August 25, 2012 at 1:28 PM
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Oh and finally, at last we learn the only way to heal.... Well done!
posted by
Justi
on August 25, 2012 at 11:45 AM
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The paraellels drawn between all three are astounding.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on August 25, 2012 at 10:26 AM
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excellent very dark but then suicidal desire and hopelessness
are very dark. I love that One more day for it is the light trying to come through. I hope you are feeling better soon dear friend.
posted by
Kabu
on August 25, 2012 at 9:28 AM
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Very good!I was part of the Suicide Hot Line for a while; the thing stressed most was to convince the caller to at least wait for one more day. So many things can change in 24 hours. As in your last verse. Her praying and waiting one more day may save her life. Hope the headache is gone now.
posted by
adnohr
on August 25, 2012 at 7:49 AM
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A very dramatic use of the parallel situations! Feel better.
posted by
2902
on August 25, 2012 at 3:01 AM
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A very dramatic use of the parallel situations! Feel better.
posted by
2902
on August 25, 2012 at 3:01 AM
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One mustn't ever stop reaching for the sun. 
posted by
TAPS.
on August 25, 2012 at 12:42 AM
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Sorry to hear that Jay take it easy
posted by
C_C_T
on August 24, 2012 at 11:22 PM
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