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fascinating form

posted by Shams-i-Heartsong on August 24, 2012 at 2:19 AM | link to this | reply

I agree with Bob, I have done a few but prefer free verse. However I do like what you do. They do not seem contrived at all, but natural and free flowing.

posted by UtahJay on August 23, 2012 at 11:03 PM | link to this | reply

Mama Seeley

®This is wonderful all around. The form and message looks good love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st

posted by BC-A on August 23, 2012 at 10:47 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Acrostic poems usually don't turn out this well - the form often forces

uninventive writers to settle for any old thing, but not here.  Everything you wrote sounds very appropriate to the occasion and really "belongs!"  Nice work!

posted by 2902 on August 23, 2012 at 5:19 PM | link to this | reply

Acrostic poems usually don't turn out this well - the form often forces

posted by 2902 on August 23, 2012 at 5:17 PM | link to this | reply