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CThis poem has everything. It’s an analogy and fantasy with imagery and personal reflection love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st

posted by BC-A on August 10, 2012 at 5:36 AM | link to this | reply

mmmmmmm.....i prefer to be alone alot

posted by Annicita on August 9, 2012 at 4:19 PM | link to this | reply

Shobana

I spent a lot of time alone in the forest and you certainly used 'lonely' well, it is that.

posted by WileyJohn on August 9, 2012 at 1:12 PM | link to this | reply

i just love to walk alone on a deserted beach, it was one of my pass times

back in Australia.

posted by Kabu on August 9, 2012 at 12:56 PM | link to this | reply

You painted a vivid picture with words.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on August 9, 2012 at 9:42 AM | link to this | reply

So it is better not to go walking alone nor to be the King of the Castle shouting you are the dirty rascal. I expect you have met a few. If you can find a spare knife , I'll  be on my way I could do with a bit of peace and quiet, I bet you won't paint your walls this colour, At least your poems are thought provoking.

posted by C_C_T on August 9, 2012 at 8:25 AM | link to this | reply

being alone is nice while walking and thinking

posted by Lanetay on August 9, 2012 at 7:14 AM | link to this | reply

Wow that was good and the last line was devastating. Bravo!

posted by lionreign on August 9, 2012 at 3:56 AM | link to this | reply

This scene describes my mind.

posted by Eleanor_Jazz on August 9, 2012 at 1:15 AM | link to this | reply

Shobana

I lost my way once or twice, but it's an intriguing landscape you created.

posted by 2902 on August 9, 2012 at 12:18 AM | link to this | reply