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Re: shobana
Not quite teenaged, I think, but definitely trying to be an adult already. Thank you 
posted by
lionreign
on August 6, 2012 at 3:14 AM
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Re: Kabu
This girl looked under the age of 10 - that's why I was inspired to write, I thought she is just too young to be so concerned with a tan
posted by
lionreign
on August 6, 2012 at 3:12 AM
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Re: C_C_T
give her a couple of years and I'm sure she'll be getting her own...
posted by
lionreign
on August 6, 2012 at 3:05 AM
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Re: WileyJohn
LOL Now that is something I hadn't thought of!
posted by
lionreign
on August 6, 2012 at 2:53 AM
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Re: BC-A
I think she will grow to value appearance over substance and I feel rather sad for her
posted by
lionreign
on August 6, 2012 at 2:52 AM
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Re: 2902
Thanks Bob, that phrase was the beginning of the whole poem
posted by
lionreign
on August 6, 2012 at 2:41 AM
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Re: Justi
Yup, I thought it was a waste of childhood
posted by
lionreign
on August 6, 2012 at 2:33 AM
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A great tan over boys..she must be definitely a teenager trying to be an adult all too soon.Wonderful Lion.
posted by
shobana
on August 4, 2012 at 3:00 AM
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great little poem yes what's a great tan worth if one misses out
on plaing with the boys....I remember being 17!!!!
posted by
Kabu
on August 3, 2012 at 10:58 AM
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Yes and I don't think it looks too good after all the effort, but you captured the feeling Lion give her a cigarette.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 3, 2012 at 9:12 AM
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lionreign
Well said, she had great self control to keep at her tanning.LOL
posted by
WileyJohn
on August 3, 2012 at 5:41 AM
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lionreign
MAppearance follows us through life. Also, they look at people in death. However this girl seems, practicing for summers in her future . BC-A, Bill’s R®st
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BC-A
on August 3, 2012 at 5:04 AM
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nice tone (no pun intended)
"Sun..-stained" is a very original phrase, and it sets the mood for what is to come. Nice effect!
posted by
2902
on August 3, 2012 at 3:26 AM
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Sadly, growing too fast.
posted by
Justi
on August 3, 2012 at 2:33 AM
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