Go to Shobana
- Add a comment
- Go to And then there were some..
What a fun read! Grand work my Shobana! Your sam 
posted by
sam444
on July 26, 2012 at 8:48 PM
| link to this | reply
Shobana
It is as if your fingers dancing over piano keys, striking notes of memory...
posted by
Nautikos
on July 26, 2012 at 7:05 PM
| link to this | reply
ps - the title
I'm not sure I understand it, but the play on "And then there were none" is wonderful.
posted by
2902
on July 26, 2012 at 10:48 AM
| link to this | reply
Hello, Dolly!
:You're still goin', you're still growin', you're still goin' strong!" Just don't stop writing, whichever voice you use!
posted by
2902
on July 26, 2012 at 10:46 AM
| link to this | reply
A lady you shall be and then a woman of mystery. Tra, la, la, the future will tell.
I want to join in your little game ,well when you were sixteen and sweet damsel. Yes Shobana let your hair down is it still brown?
posted by
C_C_T
on July 26, 2012 at 10:08 AM
| link to this | reply
I like the tempo of this poem a lot.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 26, 2012 at 9:17 AM
| link to this | reply
there seems to be a new and different style from sobana, I like it
posted by
Lanetay
on July 26, 2012 at 7:25 AM
| link to this | reply
shobana
!The poem’s witty from the perspective of a lady love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on July 26, 2012 at 5:34 AM
| link to this | reply
LOL a lady for only one year? Or can one combine that with wisecraking? I love this poem, it feels immediate and personal and it makes me smile
posted by
lionreign
on July 26, 2012 at 3:39 AM
| link to this | reply
....well done.
posted by
shamasehar
on July 26, 2012 at 1:51 AM
| link to this | reply