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Re: prison
Thank you Shobana for your positive feedback. I'm glad you found my poem engrossing and expressive. I hope you enjoy more of my work.
posted by
RamfamilyWritings
on July 20, 2012 at 6:46 AM
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Re: prison
Thank you for the read and the encouraging feedback 2902. No, I wouldn't like to be him either, but unfortunately this was written about a real person. I appreciate the visit.
posted by
RamfamilyWritings
on July 20, 2012 at 6:45 AM
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prison
Vivid and scary - I wouldn't like to be him.
posted by
2902
on July 20, 2012 at 5:11 AM
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Very engrossing - a parody of emotions expressively written.
posted by
shobana
on July 19, 2012 at 11:59 PM
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