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Upon a second reading, I think your little "play" sounds like a scene
straight from the pages of Envy, lol...hmm, not bad but now I'm wondering - the words feel déjà vu-ist..who else have you been here on Blogit?...
posted by
Katray2
on July 9, 2012 at 10:22 PM
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Excuse my ignorance but what is a "mutitude?" 
Seriously man, what are ya drinking??
posted by
Katray2
on July 9, 2012 at 10:07 PM
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almost a rapture of thought, if a mutitude means one, and no one confesses. there will always, probably, be a surprize--even if it is to be miffed, undelightedly, as she waves her fan so decidedly upon herself with a wooof, before she faints into the waiting hands of Captain Duupped.....and thus became the era of silent films...etc,etc,etc.
posted by
jfm32
on July 9, 2012 at 7:42 PM
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Ahh, glad to see you're back!! 
Thank you..
posted by
Katray2
on July 9, 2012 at 4:45 PM
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posted by
Reflecting_teddypoet
on July 9, 2012 at 4:38 PM
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Re: Hiya Katray!
Doin' pretty good, Strat, hope you are too. Thanks so much!
posted by
Katray2
on July 9, 2012 at 4:21 PM
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Hiya Katray!
Hope all is well with you -- been catching up on some long lost reading here -- as always, you do grand work, conjuring some pretty amazing images and provocative thoughts. Or as we say down here, "Damn fine writin'!"
Glad to see you here!
posted by
strat
on July 9, 2012 at 1:11 PM
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Re: Fate
Am I a confusing poet? I hope not...Well anyway, Thank you for reading, 2902.
posted by
Katray2
on July 9, 2012 at 12:41 PM
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Humm, CCT, do ya mean words of hypocrisy or my words are sludge, lol.. Whichever, thanks for dropping by.
posted by
Katray2
on July 9, 2012 at 12:40 PM
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Thank you, FSI..
posted by
Katray2
on July 9, 2012 at 12:38 PM
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Fate
I like the point you're making, though I'm not always clear on the language. It's a fine insight.
posted by
2902
on July 9, 2012 at 12:23 PM
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Well Ray one has to take the concept as a whole it does not really matter what you say these words churn out their meaning into sludge. Well as Kabu says she could grow roses beyond innocence. Hope you are making out in the heat.
posted by
C_C_T
on July 9, 2012 at 10:57 AM
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I could never do that to the truth as well.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 9, 2012 at 9:52 AM
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Re: poetry written by another can often take on a personal meaning for the
Living in the light of love is quite eye opening indeed, Dear Kabu! Thank you, my friend...
posted by
Katray2
on July 9, 2012 at 9:09 AM
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poetry written by another can often take on a personal meaning for the
reader. Good poetry like yours anyway. For me you described 40 years of my life before I met our Wiley.
posted by
Kabu
on July 9, 2012 at 8:36 AM
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