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lmao!  Love the ending

 

posted by calia14 on June 3, 2012 at 4:46 PM | link to this | reply

We always have a handicap that we need to overcome I suppose. I really love this poem Jim and how you question the reason of us being here and now..Thanks so much for your visit to my blog.

posted by shobana on June 2, 2012 at 10:54 PM | link to this | reply

Well first of all I had to look up what a word meant, remember sir we all did not go to a big school. The third day of the week was a torment to spell as it was pronounced Wensday. No I am not going to comment, unless you are giving away free samples and get over that foot fetish, I have an ingrowing toenail, do you hear me complain? When you have to to supplement your diet with non alcoholic beer, I might take you seriously.

posted by C_C_T on June 2, 2012 at 8:06 AM | link to this | reply

The line "What would I be without my past" reminds me to be grateful for being alive and surviving through the journey of the hardships of life.

posted by Eleanor_Jazz on June 2, 2012 at 3:40 AM | link to this | reply

Indeed they have a handicap! This is excellent, jfm , you have a remarkable mind and this one even sounds like it was written “un-altered”. You left a fabulous comment on my blog. I always look forward to your visits because you say something of substance and (yes) intrigue. 

posted by Troosha on June 1, 2012 at 9:10 PM | link to this | reply

Interesting thoughts, put together into a nice poem.  I like that.

posted by TAPS. on June 1, 2012 at 7:58 PM | link to this | reply