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Re:Ciel, thanks for this comment
I agree, it is the same kind of dream. The trouble is when you don't remember it is just a dream you are in.
posted by
Randir
on May 10, 2012 at 12:19 PM
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Re: Thank's Lionreign
Everytime i think it is an ending to the story, it turns out that it isn't.
posted by
Randir
on May 10, 2012 at 12:17 PM
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BC A, thanks for reading
Dreams are like that. I think they are different things, some of them just wandering around the day's left-overs, and some going lots deeper to look at more important things.
posted by
Randir
on May 10, 2012 at 12:16 PM
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Re: Thank you, UtahJ
I appreciate your reading and commenting. Sometimes a poem is so close to the writer that it is hard to know how it works for other people.
posted by
Randir
on May 10, 2012 at 12:14 PM
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I have dreamed of flying, and love to soar and chase clouds
and hot air balloons, and all... It's always wonderful until I remember, I can't actually fly. And then I can't.
Its the same thing, really, as this losing of the dream.
posted by
Ciel
on May 7, 2012 at 10:43 AM
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What a sad ending, I love the poem though
posted by
lionreign
on April 30, 2012 at 3:10 AM
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Randir
Excellent. This morning, sleeping in I remembered the characters but not the dream. Bill’s R{{st
posted by
BC-A
on April 29, 2012 at 9:54 PM
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A very powerful poem and yet touching as well, good work.
posted by
UtahJay
on April 29, 2012 at 6:05 PM
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