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Re:Ciel, thanks for this comment

I agree, it is the same kind of dream.  The trouble is when you don't remember it is just a dream you are in.

posted by Randir on May 10, 2012 at 12:19 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Thank's Lionreign

Everytime i think it is an ending to the story, it turns out that it isn't.

posted by Randir on May 10, 2012 at 12:17 PM | link to this | reply

BC A, thanks for reading

Dreams are like that.  I think they are different things, some of them just wandering around the day's left-overs, and some going lots deeper to look at more important things.

posted by Randir on May 10, 2012 at 12:16 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Thank you, UtahJ

I appreciate your reading and commenting.  Sometimes a poem is so close to the writer that it is hard to know how it works for other people.

posted by Randir on May 10, 2012 at 12:14 PM | link to this | reply

I have dreamed of flying, and love to soar and chase clouds

and hot air balloons, and all... It's always wonderful until I remember, I can't actually fly.  And then I can't.

Its the same thing, really, as this losing of the dream.

posted by Ciel on May 7, 2012 at 10:43 AM | link to this | reply

What a sad ending, I love the poem though

posted by lionreign on April 30, 2012 at 3:10 AM | link to this | reply

Randir

Excellent. This morning, sleeping in I remembered the characters but not the dream. Bill’s R{{st

posted by BC-A on April 29, 2012 at 9:54 PM | link to this | reply

A very powerful poem and yet touching as well, good work.

posted by UtahJay on April 29, 2012 at 6:05 PM | link to this | reply

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