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I'm an impatient person. Lines lie because they don't want me to be where I know or want where I think I should be. This is anathema, and maybe this is where our experiences don't meet. Loved last 3 lines, which is where I wanted to go in the first place.

I'm divided in myself how I want to be: complete decription is part of the novelist in me. On the other hand, poetry has to be as concrete as it is abstract.

Now that i'm completey lost, do you think you can help me out?

posted by jfm32 on April 11, 2012 at 6:39 PM | link to this | reply

This sounds like my kind of afternoon.

posted by UtahJay on April 8, 2012 at 11:10 PM | link to this | reply

I will remember that the next time I am told to go fly a kite! Nice, nice, nice! sam 

posted by sam444 on April 8, 2012 at 5:37 PM | link to this | reply

Well Femia tell me when you fly the kite I can't be there if I am asleep. I am glad you can enjoy the the scene again and be careful not to pull that arm or get lifted off the ground,

posted by C_C_T on April 8, 2012 at 11:07 AM | link to this | reply