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Sinome

Where we live the love is everywhere and my love Kabu even feeds the chipmunks in her lap and you feed us all love with your beautiful poetry

posted by WileyJohn on January 25, 2012 at 4:24 PM | link to this | reply

There is so much love in this world.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on January 25, 2012 at 10:10 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome

öPõ Beautiful imagery that makes your poem feel like a clear day love.  BC-A, Bill’s R®st

posted by BC-A on January 25, 2012 at 7:47 AM | link to this | reply

Well I liked your poem Simone, but I don't think everything is love.

posted by C_C_T on January 25, 2012 at 12:38 AM | link to this | reply

"The dignity of life ignored" is a powerful phrase. If

I understand correctly, you're urging the reader to leave sad or angry overlays behind so he can see nature plain, or as a show for his pleasure.  Works for me. 

posted by 2902 on January 25, 2012 at 12:29 AM | link to this | reply