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This is beautiful, the timbre of your sadness is like listening to the soft breath of the bassoon and your imagery is so engrossing that I feel your sadness as my own. Bravo my friend xoxoxoxox
posted by
lionreign
on January 3, 2012 at 8:08 AM
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I got submerged in your imagry, and I am left to wonder the depth of another person's experience, and if Ive been missing something.
posted by
jfm32
on January 2, 2012 at 7:26 PM
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Yes indeed, there are things we were never ment to forget...beautiful.
posted by
UtahJay
on January 2, 2012 at 7:04 PM
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Yes dear you will. May you sit at 90 smiling through a mauve tinged sunset remembering.
posted by
Justi
on January 2, 2012 at 4:33 PM
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as the clouds dancing in the sky watch us weep-
Hard to forget memories like this, and though sometimes bitter, if we had the choice, I don't believe we would want to.
posted by
Riversidepoet
on January 2, 2012 at 1:23 PM
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Those memories will stay for a long time.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on January 2, 2012 at 12:07 PM
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A straight-from-the-heart poem and the picture painted was really vivid. Well done princess xoxoxo. "I will remember us".
posted by
anib
on January 1, 2012 at 8:38 PM
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Reminds me of that intense song "Memories"
posted by
Straightforward
on January 1, 2012 at 6:22 PM
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a heart breaking poem...how lonely it reads.
posted by
Kabu
on January 1, 2012 at 6:12 PM
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