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Thank you- I fixed it...

posted by Shams-i-Heartsong on December 7, 2011 at 7:44 AM | link to this | reply

this printing is so small, the color so opaque, it's just hard to read.
My initial impression is you are no Kahil Gibran. But I can't tell, because it's too troublesome to read, If you have something to present, then why not make it readable? What happened to black ink on white paper?

posted by jfm32 on December 4, 2011 at 3:19 PM | link to this | reply

mH You take your cue well. BC-A, Bill’s R®s

posted by BC-A on December 4, 2011 at 12:37 PM | link to this | reply