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Great insight, Dear Sam - Thank you..

posted by Raye09 on November 15, 2011 at 5:44 PM | link to this | reply

Re: you are writing something important dear.

Thank you, Dear Kabu..

posted by Raye09 on November 15, 2011 at 5:43 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Raye09

Thanks, Bill..

posted by Raye09 on November 15, 2011 at 5:43 PM | link to this | reply

Nice work, kid!

posted by teddypoet52 on November 15, 2011 at 3:54 PM | link to this | reply

Don't give up on your dream...finish writing your epic novel. Your words are full of inspiration...just BELIEVE in yourself, and it will BE

posted by Whisperer4U on November 15, 2011 at 3:36 PM | link to this | reply

Yes it must have involved a lot of work Raye. I hope one day you will  be happy with the outcome, It is quite a wonderful piece.

posted by C_C_T on November 15, 2011 at 11:24 AM | link to this | reply

You do such a fine job of conveying the emotions.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on November 15, 2011 at 9:48 AM | link to this | reply

This is awesome~ having worked for years on an epic I can appreciate the effort one puts into this kind of writing! I always say that poems are never finished only abandoned! So take your time and enjoy the journey! sam 

posted by sam444 on November 15, 2011 at 9:29 AM | link to this | reply

you are writing something important dear.

posted by Kabu on November 15, 2011 at 8:49 AM | link to this | reply

Raye09

Y Excellent! Youthfulness and togetherness go hand in hand for all ages with each other love. The Occupy Wall Street protestors have a legitimate issue on camping gear restrictions. And they aren’t interested in the religious issues of the Middle East in their group financial protest love. BC-A, Bill’s RJJst

posted by BC-A on November 15, 2011 at 8:27 AM | link to this | reply