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I loved the picture you painted and unterstand how you felt.

posted by UtahJay on October 23, 2011 at 6:20 AM | link to this | reply

I see. It's a great, great snapshot on a roll! - Bob

posted by 2902 on October 22, 2011 at 8:11 PM | link to this | reply

Bob...
I am guilty of dashing these out more to test the waters than anything.  I was trying to establish a mood parallel to my day, as if I were someone else looking at my life through my eyes.    Thanks for the comment.

posted by food4thought on October 22, 2011 at 7:28 PM | link to this | reply

Enjoyable, vivid imagery. For me though it doesn't catch on until
stanza 3 or maybe 4.  The first two stanzas puzzle me. Bob

posted by 2902 on October 22, 2011 at 6:55 PM | link to this | reply

food4thought

m See you kept busy . BC-A, Bill’s R®st

posted by BC-A on October 22, 2011 at 6:22 PM | link to this | reply