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I loved the picture you painted and unterstand how you felt.
posted by
UtahJay
on October 23, 2011 at 6:20 AM
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I see. It's a great, great snapshot on a roll! - Bob
posted by
2902
on October 22, 2011 at 8:11 PM
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Bob...
I am guilty of dashing these out more to test the waters than anything. I was trying to establish a mood parallel to my day, as if I were someone else looking at my life through my eyes. Thanks for the comment.
posted by
food4thought
on October 22, 2011 at 7:28 PM
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Enjoyable, vivid imagery. For me though it doesn't catch on until
stanza 3 or maybe 4. The first two stanzas puzzle me. Bob
posted by
2902
on October 22, 2011 at 6:55 PM
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food4thought
m See you kept busy . BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on October 22, 2011 at 6:22 PM
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