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Very provoking, and full of meaning
posted by
Whisperer4U
on August 29, 2011 at 5:03 PM
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And yet on the page so obviously beautiful.
posted by
UtahJay
on August 29, 2011 at 12:45 PM
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your sad thoughts so beautifully woven together....i found myself giving
thanks for my blessings.
posted by
Kabu
on August 29, 2011 at 9:42 AM
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Raye09
P The right filling’s in your poems love.. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on August 29, 2011 at 9:17 AM
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Re: Raye..very melancholic, but also very true.that we are subject to
Well said, Rumor and Thank you.
posted by
Raye09
on August 29, 2011 at 8:30 AM
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Thank You, LovelyLady and you're most welcome.
posted by
Raye09
on August 29, 2011 at 8:29 AM
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Raye..very melancholic, but also very true.that we are subject to
life's whims and fancies, and we can only write what we feel as a result.
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posted by
Rumor
on August 29, 2011 at 8:29 AM
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So sad Raye. This one really hit me. Thank you for visiting me...
posted by
lovelyladymonk
on August 29, 2011 at 8:24 AM
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Most appreciated, Dear Sam...
posted by
Raye09
on August 29, 2011 at 7:54 AM
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Expressions of the pain of missing someone, CC. I know such dark ramblings don't make for enjoyable reading, but the human condition lives in every second of the hour and on each variable of the atmosphere. I Thank You for reading.
posted by
Raye09
on August 29, 2011 at 7:54 AM
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Gaps can be difficult to fill and at time it seems they are oblivious to everything, even the sun! I really like the flow of the imagery too! sam
posted by
sam444
on August 29, 2011 at 7:47 AM
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Ray this is sad perhaps it gives you comfort somehow, if so I welcome the sadness.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 29, 2011 at 7:42 AM
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