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This is awesome! I love the conclusion of the poem! KUDOS! sam 

posted by sam444 on August 15, 2011 at 12:01 AM | link to this | reply

This is awesome! I love the conclusion of the poem! KUDOS! sam 

posted by sam444 on August 15, 2011 at 12:01 AM | link to this | reply

What a fun day you describe to us.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on August 14, 2011 at 1:07 PM | link to this | reply

I love it.  What fun.

posted by TAPS. on August 14, 2011 at 11:39 AM | link to this | reply

Well this could be quite a simple exercise one day when people develop more awareness.

You could have chosen a better situation though. perhaps a tropical Island for a start and gradually increase your hubby's perception. Quite good fun    

posted by C_C_T on August 14, 2011 at 7:39 AM | link to this | reply

Myrrhage
I simply admired and loved the cadence of your beauty of a poem. That P.S. 'Bring oxygen' was classic! Such talents around here ... I am filled with wonder!!!

posted by anib on August 14, 2011 at 7:01 AM | link to this | reply

An exhalant and fun read...well thought.

posted by UtahJay on August 14, 2011 at 6:13 AM | link to this | reply

Very good! Loved the flow and fun of this poem!

posted by Ariala on August 14, 2011 at 5:25 AM | link to this | reply