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Thank you for your comment. I am not fussed about lack of comments as I write mostly for my own purposes. Having said that, when I do get an obviously heartfelt comment like yours it is special.
posted by
KRBrandli
on August 10, 2011 at 5:26 AM
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How is it that the really good poems like this get so few comments?
posted by
UtahJay
on August 8, 2011 at 11:36 AM
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Excellent.
" Very intense lines of imagery that elicit almost surreal thoughts cause both suspense and wonder. The sad ending leaves confirms the melancholy love. BC-A, Bill’s R{{st
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BC-A
on August 7, 2011 at 10:22 PM
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