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Very thought provoking...the words and the imagery woven together

posted by Whisperer4U on July 31, 2011 at 6:02 AM | link to this | reply

I know how memories can still speak, and at times they shout! Wonderful poem of imagery laden when things seemingly end in the physical but linger in the mental! I liked how the speaker qualified the imagery with their take on it too! sam 

posted by sam444 on July 30, 2011 at 10:55 AM | link to this | reply

Profound
and really made me think. Thanks

posted by malcolm on July 30, 2011 at 12:58 AM | link to this | reply

Raye09

{ Beautiful moments. Bill’s R{{st

posted by BC-A on July 29, 2011 at 10:19 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Nice work as always, Raye...
Thank you, Ted...

posted by Raye09 on July 29, 2011 at 2:57 PM | link to this | reply

Re: a wonderful read poet Queen.
Deeply appreciated, Dear Kabu..

posted by Raye09 on July 29, 2011 at 2:56 PM | link to this | reply

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Yes, indeed, FSI..Thank you.

posted by Raye09 on July 29, 2011 at 2:55 PM | link to this | reply

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Thank you kindly, CC...

posted by Raye09 on July 29, 2011 at 2:55 PM | link to this | reply

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Much appreciated, Jay..

posted by Raye09 on July 29, 2011 at 2:54 PM | link to this | reply

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Thanks, Bill..

posted by Raye09 on July 29, 2011 at 2:54 PM | link to this | reply

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Thank you, TAPS..

posted by Raye09 on July 29, 2011 at 2:53 PM | link to this | reply

Nice work as always, Raye...

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on July 29, 2011 at 12:28 PM | link to this | reply

a wonderful read poet Queen.

posted by Kabu on July 29, 2011 at 10:52 AM | link to this | reply

Those memories will remain.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on July 29, 2011 at 10:42 AM | link to this | reply

Yes sadly so Raye better to let it float out and make it beautiful

posted by C_C_T on July 29, 2011 at 10:34 AM | link to this | reply

Sadness beautifuly brought to the reader...nice work Raye.

posted by UtahJay on July 29, 2011 at 10:05 AM | link to this | reply

Y The lines put sounds into memories love. BC-A, Bill’s RJJst

posted by BC-A on July 29, 2011 at 2:57 AM | link to this | reply

Definitely a great read.  I am lingering over it and thinking about it.

posted by TAPS. on July 29, 2011 at 12:02 AM | link to this | reply