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I like the way this flows.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on July 17, 2011 at 10:07 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome

w I wish for comfort love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st  

posted by BC-A on July 16, 2011 at 11:35 PM | link to this | reply

As alway - beautiful and from the heart.  No idea what that odd symbol is all about.....

posted by Troosha on July 16, 2011 at 5:13 PM | link to this | reply

I love the pictures you create
and the emotions that come.

posted by skye08 on July 16, 2011 at 3:41 PM | link to this | reply

I want to tie a yellow ribbon in that tree for both of you to come home and dream again... I have no clue what the doolies are all I can do is type...Be blessed dear lady and keep writing poetry...

posted by Justi on July 16, 2011 at 2:37 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome
Just when I start feeling sorrow for the love that went sweetly away, I felt his joy when you said to him...." We are now just friends,but for old time sakes put your hand in mine and lets dream again...
lets..."

posted by WileyJohn on July 16, 2011 at 12:08 PM | link to this | reply

Nice poem Simone but you are becoming boxed in have you tried the insert key, or plain text. I would just delete them, until they get over their little pranks. Don't get mad at me please    

posted by C_C_T on July 16, 2011 at 10:57 AM | link to this | reply

well darling i was dreaming along with the flow of this lovely poem
so that I didn't notice the boxes...you must have pushed some button somewhere......actually i don't have a clue.

posted by Kabu on July 16, 2011 at 10:56 AM | link to this | reply