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NICE OBSERVATION, I WOULD MUCH RATHER WATCH THE WAVES AND SEAGULLS DANCE, I HAVE NOT SEEN THE OCEAN IN SO LONG, YOU HAVE MADE ME LONG TO GO.

posted by Riversidepoet on July 10, 2011 at 4:06 PM | link to this | reply

Good thinking Simone.

posted by C_C_T on July 9, 2011 at 11:37 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome

Y Excellent. You’re a natural at writing poems love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st 

posted by BC-A on July 9, 2011 at 9:23 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Sinome WileyJohn I can't help myself darlin,
but I am very partial to a dish of lobster!

posted by Kabu on July 9, 2011 at 9:01 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome
You paint a lovely picture of something I never liked to do, I just burned red like a lobster.Nice poem though luv and have a happy weekend.

posted by WileyJohn on July 9, 2011 at 8:17 PM | link to this | reply

I'm afraid I had to laugh.  I haven't sunbathed for years.  I had enough of it when I was young enough to think I had to have a tan to be beautiful and ended up with lots of sunburns.

posted by TAPS. on July 9, 2011 at 4:59 PM | link to this | reply

There are many things that we do not see...

posted by FormerStudentIntern on July 9, 2011 at 12:35 PM | link to this | reply