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Sinome, I feel the rock and sway and lull - within this poem of yours. (((xoxox))) Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on July 1, 2011 at 10:50 AM
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You've become quite the painter of scenes. Do I detect here your entry into drama? Your language and depiction gives me the feeling of being in the scene, and 1st and 3rd person seem to vanish within the story as if I'm engaged in this movie watching it. The brevity and intensity realy works. Got this feeling you might be heading for other venues--perhaps an epic poem or movie script. But don't mind me, I'm still in the middle of toasting myself for tomorow.
posted by
jfm32
on June 30, 2011 at 5:13 PM
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Don't let your faith waver, he is waiting for you. You are such a loving and kind woman.
posted by
Justi
on June 30, 2011 at 1:56 PM
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Wonderful...
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on June 30, 2011 at 7:01 AM
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some romances are hard to leave the memories
posted by
Lanetay
on June 29, 2011 at 10:33 PM
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Sinome
Beautiful poetry always, and so very sad. I pray you are well and this lovely poetry doesn't reflect personal unhappiness loving Sinome.
posted by
WileyJohn
on June 29, 2011 at 7:53 PM
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Sad it is when that great love becomes referred to in the past tense.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on June 29, 2011 at 12:26 PM
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beautiful poem sweetie, you are gifted xoxoxoxox
posted by
lionreign
on June 29, 2011 at 7:56 AM
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Sinome
ZIt’s poetic to find the smell of rain love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on June 28, 2011 at 11:47 PM
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your unhappiness comes through your words again anf again lately
i do pray that our darling friend and poet is alright.
posted by
Kabu
on June 28, 2011 at 9:39 PM
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