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That was so beautiful, so loving and tender. Well done. Be blessed lovely lady.
posted by
Justi
on June 27, 2011 at 9:11 PM
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Sinome
w Just find the passage love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on June 27, 2011 at 7:52 AM
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The longing is deep and strong...touching words
posted by
Ariala
on June 27, 2011 at 7:02 AM
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Lovely and very moving
posted by
malcolm
on June 27, 2011 at 4:34 AM
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Sinome
I loved your poem of course, I love them all and the lines below just give so much love and peace, bless you and we love you.
".....for there are other chances I am told
other lives into which we will be born
and again G-d willing love..."
posted by
WileyJohn
on June 26, 2011 at 9:23 PM
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Sinome, I'm reading a bit tonight after returning from 'away' again...and I find this poem of yours so longing - so dreamy - so touching and so passionate - so YOU Sinome. Love your writing. as one commented...Soulful ~ Elyse xoxoxo
posted by
elysianfields
on June 26, 2011 at 5:55 PM
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I was always intrigued by the thought of a secret passage from somewhere to somewhere. I've never found one, but I'm still watching for one.
posted by
TAPS.
on June 26, 2011 at 2:29 PM
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love is eternal, it can never be destroyed
this poem gave me the chills, it is powerful and soulfull
our physical experience is some sort of tough school, but the reward and joy is worth every bit of it, you have an amazing talent of taking us to your soul and spirit of the word
posted by
Tzippy
on June 26, 2011 at 11:30 AM
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Those memories can be so great to feel while at other times so painful because of the end result.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on June 26, 2011 at 10:04 AM
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