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Pretty darn good outcome, I'd say.  Thanks for inviting us to "play".

posted by Troosha on June 18, 2011 at 10:08 AM | link to this | reply

Very good John some nice little twists and turns. People like a competition and this works quite nicely.

posted by C_C_T on June 17, 2011 at 11:42 PM | link to this | reply

 J - this is awesome.  Fabulous poem - and thank you for the inspiration-invite and collaboration and yes, I must try this.  I love this poem. Elyse

posted by elysianfields on June 17, 2011 at 9:05 PM | link to this | reply

It came out fabulously :-)  Let me know when you do anotherone :-)  xoxoxo

posted by Sinome on June 17, 2011 at 8:57 PM | link to this | reply

This is a wonderful effort! I am sorry I missed this one but I was unable to read for a couple of days! I hope to be well enough to get in on the next one! sam 

posted by sam444 on June 17, 2011 at 8:29 PM | link to this | reply