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 very touching...very.  I hold you in my heart dear Sinome.  Very well written. xoxoxo Elyse

posted by elysianfields on June 15, 2011 at 6:34 AM | link to this | reply

Sending you a big hug ..just folding you in my arms and trying to ease the
pain.

posted by Kabu on June 13, 2011 at 7:43 PM | link to this | reply

posted by Troosha on June 13, 2011 at 12:31 PM | link to this | reply

It can be so painful when the realization sets in...

posted by FormerStudentIntern on June 13, 2011 at 12:15 PM | link to this | reply

how sad

posted by Lanetay on June 13, 2011 at 8:14 AM | link to this | reply

This was excellent and felt like it was a hard one to write. Be blessed dear lady!

posted by Justi on June 13, 2011 at 5:32 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Sinome
errata: grow not feel

posted by BC-A on June 13, 2011 at 4:47 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome

w Trees that avoid and refuse most elements feel unhealthy. Oppositely similarly to people they can get too many elements. Then they produce all leaves and aren’t pretty love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st

posted by BC-A on June 13, 2011 at 4:45 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Hi
Beautiful.

posted by MonishaJador on June 13, 2011 at 4:09 AM | link to this | reply

Well Simone it seems if it is the other way round that it is OK . Money, power, wrinkle together I think. I liked this poem.     

posted by C_C_T on June 12, 2011 at 11:32 PM | link to this | reply