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You not only "gift" us your words, you gift us your inner most thoughts. Sometimes as I read some of your work I feel as though I may be invading your privacy. Although the theme itself is melancholy (and I hope that's not where your head was at) you made it beautiful and heart-felt as usual.
posted by
Troosha
on June 12, 2011 at 10:26 AM
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The night imagery is beautiful.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on June 12, 2011 at 10:20 AM
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Simone you are not a flame of a candle that just quivers in the dark. Although I suppose we have our way of dealing with situations, perhaps those who laugh loudest are the saddest. So if it makes you feel stronger who would condemn that. It is good work obviously.
posted by
C_C_T
on June 11, 2011 at 11:10 PM
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Well written! I think most everyone from time to time, thinks about when they die.
posted by
reasons
on June 11, 2011 at 8:35 PM
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You sound unwell dear one ...Saturday night blues.....we care about you ,
you are very special to us...not just as a superb poet but a real and special beloved friend.
posted by
Kabu
on June 11, 2011 at 7:45 PM
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Sinome
Oh no, I won't contemplate this one tonight, it is beautifully written but the thought of you dying I shall not entertain luv.
posted by
WileyJohn
on June 11, 2011 at 7:08 PM
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