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Kudos on an awesome short poem. This has a mysterious, significant feel and thoughts. So seldom anyone gives their feet credit for carrying them, the swallows fly through the entire day and protect their nest, etc.
posted by
mariss9
on June 3, 2011 at 7:25 AM
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REPEAT
Which do you prefer? Otherwise, it stands well on its own vitality. J
posted by
joab6
on June 1, 2011 at 3:34 PM
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I think repeat works just fine! sam
posted by
sam444
on May 31, 2011 at 7:25 AM
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I've seen red dog bark at the crack of dawn (well, I have seen that...) and I like repeat - like
pete and repeat --- but, it's your choice. Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on May 30, 2011 at 4:13 PM
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I like "repeat" though what Troosha said makes sense, I think that "repeat" ties in with the feet and mirror image... the feet "take you to where you want to go but you do not give them a thought... there are two of them... so you need her name thereby implying your intention to use her and not give her a thought... the mirror, the reflection on it makes two... thus you repeat the name as you would repeat the image in the mirror...mirror which could also be a stand in for your mind...Oh well I could go on and on loll... I guess it would have sufficed to say that I would go with "repeat" for more meaning... Be well xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on May 30, 2011 at 12:04 PM
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I feel we are being forged John do you have a secret wish to devoid each of his secrets.
I am so sorry to have to tell you that my choice is VIEW and I could hardly spell that right,
posted by
C_C_T
on May 30, 2011 at 10:50 AM
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Interesting piece, jfm. My vote - declare. It felt like you were attempting to make more of a proclamation rather than simply speaking some words.
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Troosha
on May 30, 2011 at 10:35 AM
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