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I read this yesterday and it made my mind start winding up and I went away without comenting. I loved it though and came back to read again today.
posted by
TAPS.
on May 29, 2011 at 6:17 PM
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I BELIEVE THOSE WHO KNEW YOU WILL REMEMBER, ALL THINGS DONE OUT OF LOVE WILL LIVE ON, ONE LIFE TO LIVE , SOON WILL PASS, ONLY WHAT'S DONE OUT OF LOVE WILL LAST.
posted by
Riversidepoet
on May 29, 2011 at 1:44 PM
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Sinome - powerful and thoughtful, hearty write here. I wonder this myself rarely but I do, especially when I recall those that have gone before me and a memory brings such life to moments - with memories and LOVE and warmth to boot...I'm certain, yes, you would be found as LOVING, LOVELY and Valuable for all ~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on May 29, 2011 at 8:12 AM
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Sinome
Very thought-provoking! I think in the end every life will have made a difference...
posted by
Nautikos
on May 28, 2011 at 8:59 PM
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Sinome
' It makes you try to relate time with presence. Also the mental image and the state of the mind in dreaming come into play love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst l
posted by
BC-A
on May 28, 2011 at 8:44 PM
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your beautiful poetry will keep you alive forever you must publish
you have such wonderful talent and you are better than a lot of pumped up with self importance well known s already, that i can think of ...books i have bought that i then thought what the.......
posted by
Kabu
on May 28, 2011 at 4:04 PM
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PS: Hey, we can't share everything.
posted by
jfm32
on May 28, 2011 at 1:42 PM
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Interesing idea of what is happening within its Non. No, no one is going to remember you for the words you wrote, but the silt you left behind. It's only the feeling that's remembered. But writing, yes writing, is the only way we have to arrive at this secret destination within ourselves, So what's important--to be remebered, or actually having arrived someplace?
posted by
jfm32
on May 28, 2011 at 1:40 PM
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Perhaps they will celebrate (rather than mourn) the things you DID do, the places you DID go to, the thoughts you DID have and shared. I think the legacy we leave behind needn't be remarkable - it simple has to be the gift of who we chose to be and how we touched the lives of others.
posted by
Troosha
on May 28, 2011 at 11:54 AM
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A powerful poem/reflection I find this to be.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 28, 2011 at 11:52 AM
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Now Simone you know your children and grandchildren would be devestated. I only know from experience my Mother wrote a sad little letter and placed it in a powder jar once when she thought she was ill. Actually she lived for a many years afterwards but was ill in a different way. However none of my siblings would read the letter when I told them it was sad. Perhaps sometimes we should tell white lies and write happy things to be discovered to give our loved ones comfort. Other people like you as well Simone.
posted by
C_C_T
on May 28, 2011 at 11:04 AM
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...beautiful thoughts, undoubtedly much like those that cross the mind of most everyone.
posted by
reasons
on May 28, 2011 at 10:41 AM
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