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Nice work
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on May 18, 2011 at 1:52 PM
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i guess reality and deception alternate...
posted by
Straightforward
on May 17, 2011 at 12:15 PM
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I came back for another read, this really is great stuff
posted by
lionreign
on May 17, 2011 at 8:36 AM
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Only a hand reach away is a good place to be
when that special touch is needed.
posted by
TAPS.
on May 16, 2011 at 10:00 PM
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Obviously....over my head....
I will have to read again. I have read a lot of your poetry though, and you are an exceptional poet - just sayin'!
posted by
VictoriaP
on May 16, 2011 at 7:15 PM
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So much appreciated from you, Dear Troosha..
posted by
Raye09
on May 16, 2011 at 6:39 PM
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Re: Raye09
What a sweet comment - Thank you deeply, WileyFriend..
posted by
Raye09
on May 16, 2011 at 6:38 PM
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Thank You, Dear Sam!
posted by
Raye09
on May 16, 2011 at 6:38 PM
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Nice to hear from you, Cheerygirl..
posted by
Raye09
on May 16, 2011 at 6:37 PM
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Thanks, FSI!
posted by
Raye09
on May 16, 2011 at 6:37 PM
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Thank you so much, Jay..
posted by
Raye09
on May 16, 2011 at 6:37 PM
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"but a hand reach away".... you write beautifully!
posted by
Troosha
on May 16, 2011 at 6:31 PM
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Raye09
Everything you write is so specialthat I have to read it more than once,it's more like a meditation on love. Blessings my friend.
posted by
WileyJohn
on May 16, 2011 at 5:40 PM
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This did have an essence to it that was mystical! Kudos dear Raye! sam
posted by
sam444
on May 16, 2011 at 5:15 PM
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posted by
Cheerygirl
on May 16, 2011 at 1:29 PM
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I can just feel it on my skin.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 16, 2011 at 10:03 AM
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I find the ending sequence of this poem stunningly beautiful and skillfully crafted..
posted by
UtahJay
on May 16, 2011 at 9:38 AM
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Re: This is such a comfort...I am going to hold this close to me this week....
Thank you, Dear Kabu - you will both be in my thoughts and prayers..
posted by
Raye09
on May 16, 2011 at 9:20 AM
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Thanks so much, Lionreign.
posted by
Raye09
on May 16, 2011 at 9:19 AM
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Thank you, CC.
All I know is when you love, you feel everything..
posted by
Raye09
on May 16, 2011 at 9:19 AM
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This is such a comfort...I am going to hold this close to me this week....
Wiley has surgery coming up.
posted by
Kabu
on May 16, 2011 at 9:03 AM
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Elegantly done - I love the conclusion
posted by
lionreign
on May 16, 2011 at 8:37 AM
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Always interesting Ray I wonder do you go trance like and absorb the emotions which you then write so excellently. .
posted by
C_C_T
on May 16, 2011 at 8:16 AM
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Re: Nice work...excellent as always!
Glad you read it and liked, Island. Thank you..
posted by
Raye09
on May 16, 2011 at 7:01 AM
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Nice work...excellent as always!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on May 16, 2011 at 6:59 AM
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