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Very vivid

posted by Cheerygirl on May 16, 2011 at 3:02 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome

Z a sad story of reality in which the fairies needed are real adults love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst

posted by BC-A on May 16, 2011 at 2:45 AM | link to this | reply

Oh it breaks my heart. When they are women they have to gather the pieces, join them and polish it all to get through an ordinary day. May God touch and bless each heart of abuse, pain of abandonment, fear of rejection cleans them of these painful burdens and make them whole as you intended them to be in the Jesus' Name. Such awesome work, I can see her, and I have seen her time and time again 15 to 20 years later. You have such a loving heart.

posted by Justi on May 15, 2011 at 10:12 PM | link to this | reply

wow how sad

posted by Lanetay on May 15, 2011 at 7:25 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome
Very sad...

posted by Nautikos on May 15, 2011 at 6:27 PM | link to this | reply

I have seen so much like this in our broken world.

posted by UtahJay on May 15, 2011 at 2:32 PM | link to this | reply

The sort of many little girls in this world, I fear. What deep sadness your words convey!

posted by adnohr on May 15, 2011 at 1:45 PM | link to this | reply

So what could you do Simone, if it could become better I suppose one would allow it to happen regretfully.  

posted by C_C_T on May 15, 2011 at 11:17 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome
You could almost be describing Kabu as a l'il girl there luv.

posted by WileyJohn on May 15, 2011 at 10:43 AM | link to this | reply

one feels such pain that a child who should be laughing and playing
has experienced so much pain....so much negativity.

posted by Kabu on May 15, 2011 at 10:38 AM | link to this | reply

The speaker expresses the negative emotion so well.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on May 15, 2011 at 10:06 AM | link to this | reply