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Tzippy
Very compelling! You certainly 'let it all hang out' with abandon...
posted by
Nautikos
on May 11, 2011 at 5:48 AM
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Wow, powerful stuff!
I admire how you are honest about desire and it's strike on emotions and flesh, but delve beyond the surface flames to where the embers endure or can endure, if tended just right. Awesome writing and best of everything in this exciting time of discovery.
posted by
Raye09
on May 11, 2011 at 12:10 AM
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You express the emotions you felt oh so well.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 10, 2011 at 7:30 PM
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That is one heck of a date, girl. The fire of desire, and all....excellent!
posted by
Darson
on May 10, 2011 at 6:47 PM
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Excellent Tzippy.
posted by
shobana
on May 10, 2011 at 2:18 PM
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very nice... a good description of true instinctive desire and of the
almost equally strong desire for honest caring... the truest love will contain both but not always necessarily at the same time...
posted by
wiserabbit
on May 10, 2011 at 1:23 PM
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The ever haunting question if wild passion really means higher, committed 
true love. It does not always seem to lead there, but I hope you find one that does.
posted by
mariss9
on May 10, 2011 at 12:49 PM
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wow woman! I don't know if I need sex or ice cream?! This is some amazing stuff here. you go girl!
posted by
Inspired7211
on May 10, 2011 at 12:29 PM
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I just read what Justi wrote and now I have the giggles.....But darling you
are a healthy beautiful woman with normal urges and when you meet someone with the right chemistry for you....wow do you write wonderful poetry.
posted by
Kabu
on May 10, 2011 at 7:51 AM
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Very passionate and so beautifully expressed :-) but even at the risk of making you frown I must say this... take it slow ... Good cooking is in the simmering not the burning :-) xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on May 10, 2011 at 5:06 AM
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Lordy, Lordy somebody fence this woman in until this man makes his intentions known!!!
posted by
Justi
on May 9, 2011 at 10:58 PM
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