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posted by
Randir
on July 22, 2011 at 10:26 AM
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I especially like the dust devils...
posted by
Randir
on May 12, 2011 at 8:12 PM
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Vey cool stuff!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on May 10, 2011 at 2:04 PM
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Stunningly beautiful. Emotive to the last dove`s murmuring.
posted by
CUPLETS
on May 8, 2011 at 8:14 PM
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Quite descriptive. I felt as if I was experiencing it 
posted by
GypsyButterfly
on May 8, 2011 at 12:53 PM
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very nicely done an enjoyable read. Thank you.
posted by
Kabu
on May 7, 2011 at 5:42 PM
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a wondermous ode to youth!
posted by
poet_prophetess
on May 7, 2011 at 5:35 PM
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I have always had an interest in precious and semi precious stones, I was taken by your use of lapis to describe the sky, a very apt and cleaver description, and for that moment I could see with your eyes...a wonderful poem.
posted by
UtahJay
on May 7, 2011 at 3:40 PM
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