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lionreign, the wolf is mourning and mourned.

posted by Randir on May 9, 2011 at 3:26 PM | link to this | reply

Sam, thanks!
I am still thinking about why that word came up and what 'monster' means to me.

posted by Randir on May 9, 2011 at 3:26 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you, UtahJay

posted by Randir on May 9, 2011 at 3:24 PM | link to this | reply

mourning the wolf stole this poem for me - what imagery!

posted by lionreign on May 9, 2011 at 10:14 AM | link to this | reply

The monster in the dark set the poem up perfectly for me! sam 

posted by sam444 on May 7, 2011 at 8:17 AM | link to this | reply

One of the better poems of the day...great work here.

posted by UtahJay on May 6, 2011 at 10:48 AM | link to this | reply

Friskyinsane
Thanks for reading and for this compliment.  Reading some of your poems I see what you like in this. 

posted by Randir on May 6, 2011 at 9:27 AM | link to this | reply

Thank you, Bill--it crept up on me, too.

posted by Randir on May 6, 2011 at 8:29 AM | link to this | reply

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wow...an intense poem! consider yourself talented! coz you are =D

posted by friskyinsane on May 6, 2011 at 8:00 AM | link to this | reply

D The words creep up on you with suspense to an ending that works. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst

posted by BC-A on May 6, 2011 at 5:12 AM | link to this | reply