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And then youth quietly fades away an unannounced! It is a grand start to something that could be big! sam
posted by
sam444
on May 7, 2011 at 8:14 AM
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Based on something in ground, profound, rebounding always. Thank you,
Raye 09 
posted by
CUPLETS
on May 6, 2011 at 4:58 PM
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I like the way in which the thoughts flow.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 6, 2011 at 10:52 AM
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Thank you so much, Jay..
posted by
Raye09
on May 6, 2011 at 7:17 AM
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I am a big believer in the idea of rebirth through grace and growth - it is the way of the soul - even in the midst of unimagined confusion, possession?, tragedy, death..
Thank you, CC.
posted by
Raye09
on May 6, 2011 at 7:16 AM
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This feels like the beginning of something vast and terrible, hopefully to end in triumph and joy. Great atmospheric writing though - bravo!
posted by
lionreign
on May 6, 2011 at 7:12 AM
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Like Wiley, I felt the pain and the sadness. I didn't feel too much hope. Does it come?
posted by
Troosha
on May 6, 2011 at 7:05 AM
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D Horror movie irony’s too often domestic love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on May 6, 2011 at 5:13 AM
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An agony of so many families written of with cleaverness and beuty...I think.
posted by
UtahJay
on May 6, 2011 at 2:15 AM
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Well Ray it was a strong force that struck the life stem of a magnificent tree I assume. I suppose people make there own assumption. It is strong writing as though you feel you want to throw something dangerous into it, but you retain the feeling of hope. Thank you so much for your comments on my blog.
posted by
C_C_T
on May 6, 2011 at 12:41 AM
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Re: is new life going to grow from this devastation...so many exciting paths
Hello Dear Kabu - I truly hope so..Thank you so much, Dear Friend!
posted by
Raye09
on May 5, 2011 at 10:14 PM
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Re: Raye09
I'm not sure, Dear WileyFriend - all good possibilities you present; a stranger, older-than-earth-or-nature-themselves kind of force maybe..This is a reality-true events based stream of thought which turned into a storytelling. There may be more added; certainly more to what actually happened and the "effects" still being lived to this very moment..
You are forever young to me and I'm sure everyone else here; most especially Your Dear, sweet, beloved Kabu!
Thank you..
posted by
Raye09
on May 5, 2011 at 10:12 PM
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is new life going to grow from this devastation...so many exciting paths
can be exploered from here. what an imagination...what a fabulous writer you are.
posted by
Kabu
on May 5, 2011 at 10:11 PM
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Raye09
I sense a cataclysmic eruption caused by a nuclear device? A hurricane? Toronado? Ach but I am getting old and can't really make sense of some things anymore. But I can feel the pain of it.
posted by
WileyJohn
on May 5, 2011 at 9:58 PM
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